Does this hub stand a chance for a niche site?

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  1. SakinaNasir53 profile image98
    SakinaNasir53posted 17 months ago

    Hi everyone! I have written the following hub recently. Does it stand a chance of getting selected? I still have 6 more days left after which I can submit this hub. Please read and tell me what you think of it. Your help will be appreciated. smile

    Here's the link to my hub:

    http://hubpages.com/relationships/Survi … Experience

    1. Sherry Hewins profile image96
      Sherry Hewinsposted 17 months agoin reply to this

      It looks good to me. Although small improvements might be made, I don't see why it wouldn't be accepted.

      I think your title is good. If you wanted to shorten it, just make it Surviving a Long-Distance Relationship, although I think it's fine the way it is.

      If you have just published this, I would not be surprised if it was picked for a niche site before your six days are up.

      1. SakinaNasir53 profile image98
        SakinaNasir53posted 17 months agoin reply to this

        Hi Sherry Hewins! smile

        Thank you for your advice and honest feedback. Your comment is very encouraging. smile

    2. profile image59
      Theodore de Silvaposted 17 months agoin reply to this

      Dear Sakina,

      I am not sure of the title. " Surviving " sounds like moving on when it is over. Like a wife surviving the death of her husband. That is the normal context of how "surviving " is understood. For an active ongoing relationship you can use " Succeeding in a Long Term Relationship " .  How you could further enhance contents is to include reflective info on the mistakes that you have to avoid. Just my opinion.Hope it helps.

      1. SakinaNasir53 profile image98
        SakinaNasir53posted 17 months agoin reply to this

        Hi Theodore! smile

        Thanks a lot for your valuable feedback. I'm sorry I hadn't seen your reply. You are right. I need to change the title.

  2. lobobrandon profile image88
    lobobrandonposted 17 months ago

    Mobile Second Skin? Maybe say it's an extension of your arm or something. Second skin doesn't work well in my opinion.

    Patience, my Friend - Is this something you face or some advice? Change the subheading to match the others in the category probably.

    P.S: I Only looked at the structure and read the headings. Nothing more smile I could be wrong with what I said above.

    1. SakinaNasir53 profile image98
      SakinaNasir53posted 17 months agoin reply to this

      Hi lobobrandon! smile

      Yeah, I felt that second skin sounded weird too. I just didn't know which word to use. Do you think "You Stay Glued to your Mobile Phone" sounds okay?

      Patience is an advice, you are right I need to change the sub headings.

      Thank you so much for your valuable feedback. smile

      1. lobobrandon profile image88
        lobobrandonposted 17 months agoin reply to this

        Yup, I think staying glued to your phone sounds good. Use that smile

        1. SakinaNasir53 profile image98
          SakinaNasir53posted 17 months agoin reply to this

          I have made the changes. Thanks once again! smile

  3. simplehappylife profile image83
    simplehappylifeposted 17 months ago

    Hey, Sakina smile 

    Very heartfelt article. 
    What if you shortened the title to something like "What a Long Distance Relationship Has Taught Me".  Also, on your numbers, if they are small numbers like 3 or 6, you should write them "three" and "six".

    Another thing is that I really like the layout of the second half.  The colorbox titles, the second part is more visually appealing.  What if you used the same style for the first half?

    Just some ideas smile  I hope that helps smile

    1. SakinaNasir53 profile image98
      SakinaNasir53posted 17 months agoin reply to this

      Hi simplehappylife! smile

      Thanks a lot for your honest feedback and ideas. smile I will see what changes I can make. smile

      1. simplehappylife profile image83
        simplehappylifeposted 17 months agoin reply to this

        You're Welcome smile  looking forward to reading the final product smile

        1. SakinaNasir53 profile image98
          SakinaNasir53posted 17 months agoin reply to this

          I have made some changes in my hub. Would you please look into it once again? smile

          1. profile image59
            Theodore de Silvaposted 17 months agoin reply to this

            Did you see the reply I sent ? Hope it helped.

  4. MuhammadAmeen89 profile image82
    MuhammadAmeen89posted 17 months ago

    nice hub and yes I think it would and should get accepted in a niche site. However, I would recommend adding some more images for some of the sections such as these:

    2. You Always Stay Glued to your Mobile Phone
    3. Priorities will Change

    They have little content and adding an image would balance it out

    1. SakinaNasir53 profile image98
      SakinaNasir53posted 17 months agoin reply to this

      Thank you so much MuhammadAmeen89 for your valuable feedback and appreciation. smile

 
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