Success Starts With Self

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  1. Rosa Ann Crowder profile image81
    Rosa Ann Crowderposted 18 months ago

    Need help, thanks

    1. theraggededge profile image98
      theraggededgeposted 18 months agoin reply to this

      With what?

  2. Rosa Ann Crowder profile image81
    Rosa Ann Crowderposted 18 months ago

    I submitted Success Starts With Self to Hubpages Network Site. It was not selected. I need help in improving my hub.

  3. Rupert Taylor profile image98
    Rupert Taylorposted 18 months ago

    But, nobody can help if we can't see the Hub. You need to post a link.

  4. chasmac profile image95
    chasmacposted 18 months ago

    I'll put the link for you so others can weigh in.
    https://hubpages.com/business/Success-Starts-With-Self

    You have grammar errors, awkward phrasing, incorrect punctuation, and you haven't sourced your photos to show you have the legal right to use them.

    Some examples
    Thrive to be the best you can be. = Strive to be the best you can be.

    Sometimes the heaviness of day after day problems and setbacks and the nagging feeling of despair and the need for fulfillment can bring one down.

    Sometimes the heaviness of day after day problems, setbacks, the nagging feeling of despair and the need for fulfillment can bring one down.

    I am sad to say but his/her worst enemy. > incomplete sentence

    Subtitle: Don't Let Other's [Others] Pull You Down.

  5. Rosa Ann Crowder profile image81
    Rosa Ann Crowderposted 18 months ago

    Thank you so much. I fixed those errors. Does anyone see anything else?

    1. chasmac profile image95
      chasmacposted 18 months agoin reply to this

      Ok - here's some more

      "Success is about building relationships, making connections, and become [becoming] robust."

      "Make an accurate list every morning, [morning with] things to accomplish for that particular day[; doing] this helps me to stay motivated and focused on what I need to achieve[.]"

      "Just always remember, we cannot become successful without people; accepting that everyone has problems." > This is a confusing sentence. Why is the word 'people' there? It reads like 'We can't become successful unless people accept that everyone has problems', or do you mean that we can't become successful without people? If you remove'people'. it makes sense, but maybe it's not the meaning you want to convey.

      "Critical thinking [is] defined as a type of rational thinking about what to believe or what to do in any given situation."

      There are more, but that's all I have time for right now. Also you still haven't provided a source for your photos. It's a must for acceptance to a niche site.

      1. Rosa Ann Crowder profile image81
        Rosa Ann Crowderposted 18 months agoin reply to this

        I did those changes. Thank you

        1. Solaras profile image97
          Solarasposted 18 months agoin reply to this

          I'd just like to say that it's nice to see somebody asking for help, and accepting the help they receive graciously. I don't look at these posts often so I may have a skewed view, but in many I have looked at the OP became belligerent.

          Good luck with the changes in your Hub; I hope it is successful for you.

          1. Rosa Ann Crowder profile image81
            Rosa Ann Crowderposted 18 months agoin reply to this

            thank you

  6. Jesse Drzal profile image96
    Jesse Drzalposted 18 months ago

    The topic is off. No way this is business or entrepreneur it belongs in self-help, things of that nature possibly. You do have a positive message just clean it up get rid of the run on stuff that's redundant. Little more meat on the bone.

    1. Rosa Ann Crowder profile image81
      Rosa Ann Crowderposted 18 months agoin reply to this

      I changed it to self-help. thanks

  7. Rosa Ann Crowder profile image81
    Rosa Ann Crowderposted 18 months ago

    thanks for your advice.

    1. Jesse Drzal profile image96
      Jesse Drzalposted 18 months agoin reply to this

      By no means am I telling you how or what to write, but perhaps you could share some sort of interest, hobbies, things of that nature to help connect a little better through your Hubs.

      1. Rosa Ann Crowder profile image81
        Rosa Ann Crowderposted 18 months agoin reply to this

        Good idea, thanks

 
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