I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub 5 Great Excuses To Eat Dark Chocolates. What can I do to improve? Thanks!
The title is much better but same problems as before with the article. - Too many grammar errors.
Look at your first sentences. "Are you a CHOCOHOLIC? Well, if you do then great news!"
It's "...if you ARE" not ".. if you DO". The clue is in the opening question "ARE you...?"
And in the next sentence
"Did you know that studies have found that chocolates contain more than 300 components that is beneficial to your health."
That's a question so should have a question mark. Also ... 300 components that ARE (not "IS") beneficial...
You have many similar errors.
Hi premjayaram! Welcome to HubPages.
I agree with chasmac here. Also, I noticed that you have misplaced points 4 and 5. Do correct the numbers there. Remove the Amazon capsule and see if your hub gets featured.
I hope this helps. Good luck!
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