I'd like feedback on my Hub: Can a friend just walkaway?

  1. Oopsvats profile image59
    Oopsvatsposted 12 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Can a friend just walkaway? (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. MuhammadAmeen89 profile image79
      MuhammadAmeen89posted 12 months agoin reply to this

      Hey, welcome to hubpages

      I the first couple of paragraphs I found some grammatical errors, you might want to recheck that. For eg

      "She was a boarded and I a day scholar, but that never came in between what we shared. for five years in law school"

      After "shared", the "f" for for should be capital. I also think you should consider increasing the word count more.

      Hope this helps and <snipped>

    2. Jason mackenzie profile image44
      Jason mackenzieposted 12 months agoin reply to this

      Hi, how about starting with the heading? 'Walk' and 'Away' should be two different words. Plus I think your hub is too short - it needs to be at least 700 words to be considered. Thanks, regards...

 
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