I'd like feedback on my Hub: Can a friend just walkaway?

  1. Oopsvats profile image59
    Oopsvatsposted 7 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Can a friend just walkaway? (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. MuhammadAmeen89 profile image84
      MuhammadAmeen89posted 7 months agoin reply to this

      Hey, welcome to hubpages

      I the first couple of paragraphs I found some grammatical errors, you might want to recheck that. For eg

      "She was a boarded and I a day scholar, but that never came in between what we shared. for five years in law school"

      After "shared", the "f" for for should be capital. I also think you should consider increasing the word count more.

      Hope this helps and <snipped>

    2. Jason mackenzie profile image48
      Jason mackenzieposted 7 months agoin reply to this

      Hi, how about starting with the heading? 'Walk' and 'Away' should be two different words. Plus I think your hub is too short - it needs to be at least 700 words to be considered. Thanks, regards...