I'd like feedback on my Hub: How to write a poem with examples

  1. Ivana Komel profile image61
    Ivana Komelposted 11 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub How to write a poem with examples (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. Jason mackenzie profile image46
      Jason mackenzieposted 11 months agoin reply to this

      Hi, very informative hub but I would like to make 2 suggestions. Firstly, the title of your hub should be in title case and secondly, I wonder if it is falling short of the requisite word count.

      That said, overall the flow is good except for a few extra words here and there. Like for example this sentence - Did you ever find yourself wanting to write a poem, but did not know how to start it? - how about eliminating 'it' and ending the sentence with 'start'?

      Hope I have been able to help, thanks, regards...

 
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