I'd like feedback on my Hub: How to write a poem with examples

  1. Ivana Komel profile image60
    Ivana Komelposted 7 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub How to write a poem with examples (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. Jason mackenzie profile image44
      Jason mackenzieposted 7 months agoin reply to this

      Hi, very informative hub but I would like to make 2 suggestions. Firstly, the title of your hub should be in title case and secondly, I wonder if it is falling short of the requisite word count.

      That said, overall the flow is good except for a few extra words here and there. Like for example this sentence - Did you ever find yourself wanting to write a poem, but did not know how to start it? - how about eliminating 'it' and ending the sentence with 'start'?

      Hope I have been able to help, thanks, regards...

 
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