I'd like feedback on my article: How Believe can Create or Destroy

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   Poet Archana Dasposted 4 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve?
   I have made some changes, but it still shows problem.
   Please help! Thanks!
   Here is my article: How Believe can Create or Destroy (must be signed in to view)

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      Gyanendra Mocktanposted 4 years agoin reply to this

      Your has 404. You have to begin anew.
      Thank you.

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   AliciaCposted 4 years ago

   The article is looking much better than when I last saw it. I can see some more errors, though. I know that language is sometimes used creatively in poems, but the title of the article is grammatically incorrect and won't attract readers. “How Belief Can Create or Destroy” would be better. The title of the poem should also say belief instead of believe. The poem is your personal creation, but you might want to consider changing believe to belief there as well.
   
   You should check the grammar and the spacing in the prose section. In addition, the photos should have a suitable license for use on HubPages. I  notice that there's a watermark on the first photo, which I didn't see before. It might be viewed as promotional. That's something to consider if other changes don't help your article to pass the Quality Assessment Process.

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      Poet Archana Dasposted 4 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you Alicia for telling me where the errors actually exist. I also did not notice that the picture has watermark.

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   Niks007posted 4 years ago

   Yes, I agree with Alicia. You must replace 'believe' with 'belief.' Moreover, you can arrange the capsules in an appealing way. Check the grammatical issues. Your article is informative and motivating. keep tweaking and you will succeed.

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   Poet Archana Dasposted 4 years ago

   Thank you for motivating Niks. Yes, I am going to work on your suggestions.

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   Gyanendra Mocktanposted 4 years ago

   I'd like to suggest you here if you don't mind. It should How belief.
   
   English is not my first language. I had struggle to overcome such mistakes for long long years. Similarly, I guess English is same for you. Keep on walking. Thank you.

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      Poet Archana Dasposted 4 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you Gyanendra for suggesting.

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   Gyanendra Mocktanposted 4 years ago

   You are most welcome..

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