I'd like feedback on my Hub: We are not meant to live in darkness, for we are th

  1. Alise Schmitt profile image79
    Alise Schmittposted 4 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub We are not meant to live in darkness, for we are the light of the Lord (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. Rupert Taylor profile image97
    Rupert Taylorposted 4 months ago

    First your headline is way too long and does not adequately describe the subject of your article. This seems to be how religious faith can help people deal with depression, although the Hub does ramble about into other areas.

    You should not use bold face type except in headlines and sub-heads. Images have to be free of copyright restrictions and credited.

    There are some blocks of white space that you should get rid of, and there are some grammatical errors.

    You need to spend time in the Learning Center here https://hubpageshelp.com/

    And I'd suggest running your text through a free program such as Grammarly or Hemingway to fix grammar problems.

    1. Alise Schmitt profile image79
      Alise Schmittposted 4 months ago in reply to this

      Thank you for your feedback! It helps!

 
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