I'd like feedback on my Hub: How a Water Mill Works

  1. littlestitchesart profile image60
    littlestitchesartposted 5 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub How a Water Mill Works (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image96
      theraggededgeposted 5 months agoin reply to this

      Hi Irene,

      I'm afraid the main problem with your article is your English. If you could get someone to proofread it for you, I'm sure you could get it accepted and featured. Your photos are really good.

      Let me give you an example of what requires correcting:

      "14th May is the National Mill Day in UK and majority of mills in UK are opened to people who want to visit them."

      "The 13th and 14th of May 2017 is National Mills Weekend in the UK, when many mills are open to the public."

      http://www.nationalmillsweekend.co.uk

      Unfortunately, the weekend has passed now, so it would be better to write this for next year.

      You need to add sub-titles to your text capsules - check out the Learning Center for more tips about hub layout. https://hubpageshelp.com/standards/Lear … iting-Tips

 
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