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I'd like feedback on my Hub: The grace of the Lord Jesus Christ. : How i met the

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    Adrian syposted 4 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub The grace of the Lord Jesus Christ. : How i met the Lord or rather how He lead me to Him (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image97
      theraggededgeposted 4 months ago in reply to this

      Hi Adrian,

      You need to learn how to title and format a hub properly.

      These two articles will help you:

      https://hubpageshelp.com/content/Learni … ndly-Title

      https://hubpageshelp.com/standards/Lear … iting-Tips

      Many other articles here: https://hubpageshelp.com

    2. Sherry Hewins profile image94
      Sherry Hewinsposted 4 months ago in reply to this

      I don't think there is anything you can do to make this hub successful.

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        Adrian syposted 4 months ago in reply to this

        Okay hmm

    3. Charlino99 profile image84
      Charlino99posted 4 months ago in reply to this

      The best way to fix your hub is to tell your story from the heart.   You have a topic without a story.    Share your knowledge. Explain who you are, what your subject is about, where you are coming from, when you came to know Him, and how He has made your life better.  Write with a soul purpose.  Include a few photos of things in which your Lord speaks to you. Add a video of how you are inspired by His grace.

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    Adrian syposted 4 months ago

    Thanl you very much

  3. Rupert Taylor profile image97
    Rupert Taylorposted 4 months ago

    HubPages is a platform for writers; that means people who have interesting information to share and who have an excellent command of the English language.

    There are numerous errors in your article with corrections in brackets.


    "Here is my story on (about) how I met the Lord. Or rather how He shown (showed) Himself to me. My name is Adrian and I m (I'm) 30+ years old, I am the eldest amongst my siblings and I was born in a famliy (family)of unbelievers.

    "It was funny and amazing at the same time (What was?). Considering I was born and raised in family of unbelievers I believe (believed)in God at (from) the age of 4 (four) or 5 (five) just simply watching Bible stories on TV. Of course my knowledge of the Lord back then was still too shallow to know about (the) Lord s (Lord's) salvation and the work of His work of the cross (confusing). I know and believe God simply use (uses) those stories to have His way in me. Cause (Because) from that moment on I knew there is one God ..."

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    Adrian syposted 4 months ago

    Thank u mr rupert. I ll have it corrected a.s.a.p. thank you for ur time and effort to look at my small work.

 
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