I'd like feedback on my Hub: Things you may didn't knew about Playstation 4

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    madnikhalidposted 3 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Things you may didn't knew about Playstation 4 (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image96
      theraggededgeposted 3 months ago in reply to this

      Hi there,

      The hub is full of grammar issues and capitalisation errors, like this:

      "it's only umm not only sorry".

      HubPages requires professionally written magazine-style articles.

  2. Susan SJ profile image81
    Susan SJposted 3 months ago

    Hey,

    The title is quite unclear.
    There are many grammar mistakes that you need to fix.

    All the best. smile

 
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