I'd like feedback on my Hub: Some things kids know better, why can't we?

  1. Gagandeep reehal profile image64
    Gagandeep reehalposted 6 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Some things kids know better, why can't we? (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. jrk1121 profile image84
      jrk1121posted 6 months agoin reply to this

      The story and question are great! The grammar and wording..... It is usually better to write in your natural tongue because it is easier to understand the rules and context of words and you wouldn't make so many mistakes.

      I just published a hub with an entire section dedicated to this exact point (can't share link)

  2. Rupert Taylor profile image99
    Rupert Taylorposted 6 months ago

    There are many grammar mistakes that will keep this article from passing QAP.