I'd like feedback on my Hub: Pregnancy With Diabetes: Am I At Risk Of Having A S

  1. docashp profile image67
    docashpposted 2 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Pregnancy With Diabetes: Am I At Risk Of Having A Stillbirth? (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. Jeremy Gill profile image87
      Jeremy Gillposted 2 months ago in reply to this

      Is it just me, or have we already talked about this article? Regardless, here are suggestions:
      1) Make some of the half-width photos full-width.
      2) Use the active voice over the passive more. Saying "the increased risk is present in women" is less interesting than "the risk presents itself often in women."
      3) Remove the amazon capsule, or at least discuss it and offer insight.

      Best of luck.

  2. docashp profile image67
    docashpposted 2 months ago

    Thanks a lot jeremy.

 
working