I'd like feedback on my Hub: Pregnancy With Diabetes: Am I At Risk Of Having A S

  1. docashp profile image53
    docashpposted 5 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Pregnancy With Diabetes: Am I At Risk Of Having A Stillbirth? (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. Jeremy Gill profile image96
      Jeremy Gillposted 5 months agoin reply to this

      Here are my ideas:
      1) Either remove the Amazon Capsule or briefly discuss it and why it's a good deal
      2) Make some of your half-width photos full-width
      3) Utilize the active voice over the passive voice more
      4) A table might help arrange some of your statistics

      You used lots of headings to divide your topics well so kudos there. Best of luck.

      1. docashp profile image53
        docashpposted 5 months agoin reply to this

        Thanks Jeremy.Your help is much appreciated.

 
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