I'd like feedback on my Hub: Old Is the New Fashion: Adorn Yourself With Mehandi

  1. Viz-eta profile image75
    Viz-etaposted 2 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Old Is the New Fashion: Adorn Yourself With Mehandi and Alta (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. Jeremy Gill profile image88
      Jeremy Gillposted 2 months ago in reply to this

      Here are suggestions:
      1) Reword awkwardly-phrased sentences, like "They are crushed into powder then." A better format would be "Then, they are crushed into powder."
      2) Check for spelling/grammar errors. For example, "Do not expect dark tattoo as soon as you put Mehandi." Try something like "Do not expect a dark tattoo as you as you apply Mehandi."
      3) Organize your information. Break up the big text chunk at the beginning, don't be afraid to make some of your half-width photos full-width, and highlight the different steps midway through the article.
      4) Try thinking of a catchier title.

      The last part of the Hub has much better organization, kudos to you there. Best of luck.

      1. Viz-eta profile image75
        Viz-etaposted 2 months ago in reply to this

        Thanks a lot.
        Regards
        Vijeta Goel

 
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