I'd like feedback on my article: Cockroaches zombified

  1. burhanuddin1999 profile image79
    burhanuddin1999posted 2 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Cockroaches zombified (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. Rupert Taylor profile image96
    Rupert Taylorposted 2 months ago

    Hi

    An interesting article with a few glitches.

    Your headline should be in Title Face - Cockroaches Zombified. I'm not an expert in attracting search engine hits, but I wonder of that title does the job. Perhaps, someone else can suggest a better head.

    There are several minor grammar etc. issues:

    "These wasp larvae will eventually kill its host," should be their host

    "The Emerald jewel wasp is one such example," don't capitalize emerald.

    "Dramatically speaking her sting zombifies a cockroach" needs a period/full stop at the end of the sentence.

    There are a few cases where the definite and indefinite articles - the and a - are missing.

    Are your images free of copyright restrictions? A couple just say "Wikimedia Commons.

    Hope this helps

 
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