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I'd like feedback on my article: Cockroaches zombified

  1. burhanuddin1999 profile image80
    burhanuddin1999posted 7 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Cockroaches zombified (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. Jeremy Gill profile image86
      Jeremy Gillposted 7 weeks ago in reply to this

      Here are my suggestions:
      1) Proofread and remove spelling/grammar errors.
      2) Be consistent with capitalization of words in headings (including in your article's title).
      3) Break up your larger paragraphs with bullet points, sub-headings, or other organizational tools.

      I enjoyed the vivid pictures, well done there. Best of luck.

  2. pen promulgates profile image80
    pen promulgatesposted 7 weeks ago

    Hey Jeremy, this is an old post by Burhan. He has made many changes since. But your observations are undoubtedly correct smile

    1. Jeremy Gill profile image86
      Jeremy Gillposted 7 weeks ago in reply to this

      40 hours doesn't seem too old to me, but I suppose lots of changes can happen in that time haha.

 
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