I'd like feedback on my article: Trave Asia: Manila Ocean Park

  1. Sugar Faith profile image30
    Sugar Faithposted 6 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Trave Asia: Manila Ocean Park (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. greenmind profile image95
      greenmindposted 6 months agoin reply to this

      I am in awe of your ablity to make yourself understood in more than one language. More than I can do! However this piece of writing is very rough in terms of English grammar, spelling, sentence structure, and usage. Too many mistakes to go into individually. I'm not sure what you can do about it, sorry!

    2. theraggededge profile image99
      theraggededgeposted 6 months agoin reply to this

      Sugar Faith, this will seem harsh, but your English is not up to the standard required by HubPages. There is no point writing hub after hub, until you can be reasonably confident they will be approved.

      We can't help you correct every error - and there are errors in every sentence.

      The best thing to do is to go and spend some time working on your written English. Then come back and try again.