I'd like feedback on my article: Change of mindset

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  1. ARUN KANTI profile image57
    ARUN KANTIposted 16 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
    Here is my article: Change of mindset

  2. Miebakagh57 profile image71
    Miebakagh57posted 16 months ago

    I am unable to detected any issue in the article.                                    However, I opine that your Englsh tone pose a peculiar problem. In that case, I advice that you download grammarly, English editing software here www.grammarly.com/                                     Run your entire article through the tool. Make some changes in English grammar, punctuation, and structure.

    1. ARUN KANTI profile image57
      ARUN KANTIposted 16 months agoin reply to this

      Thanks.

  3. AliciaC profile image96
    AliciaCposted 16 months ago

    Arun, your article contains one watermarked image from a stock photo agency and another image from another photo agency. You need to use photographs with a suitable license (public domain or a Creative Commons commercial license), or you need to use a photograph that you took yourself. If you use a photo from a stock agency, it must be an image that you purchased or have the right to use.

  4. ARUN KANTI profile image57
    ARUN KANTIposted 16 months ago

    Thank you for your valuable advice.

  5. MizBejabbers profile image87
    MizBejabbersposted 16 months ago

    Your story is very interesting, and it gives insight into another country for me. My complaint as an editor is the lack of commas. Commas are very important in compound sentences and complex sentences when writing in English. Also, your use of the term "mobile set" confused me because as an American term, it is ambiguous. It could be a mobile phone or one of several types of two-way radios. It was when you lost the "mobile set" on the bus, that I realized that you meant a telephone. In the U.S., we call it a cell phone, but the terminology would depend on the audience you were trying to reach. I applaud your efforts.

    1. ARUN KANTI profile image57
      ARUN KANTIposted 16 months agoin reply to this

      Thanks for your apt advice and comments which are encouraging.

 
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