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I'd like feedback on my article: Ideal gift - hand made or shop bought?

  1. rox19 profile image60
    rox19posted 2 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Ideal gift - hand made or shop bought? (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. Stephanie Purser profile image81
    Stephanie Purserposted 2 months ago

    Hi,
    The content of your article is fine. Mind you I'll just clarify right now, not everyone has lots of friends lol.
    Unfortunately I'd assume it's purely grammar and spelling holding you back. For example, "i done tonnes of research" should be " I did tones of research". Copy and paste your whole article into a office word document to correct this if grammar isn't your strong suite.

    1. theraggededge profile image97
      theraggededgeposted 2 months agoin reply to this

      Tons or tonnes. Tones is something completely different big_smile

    2. rox19 profile image60
      rox19posted 2 months agoin reply to this

      Thank you! I think I sorted out ....

  3. Stephanie Purser profile image81
    Stephanie Purserposted 2 months ago

    I'm Australian and meant tonnes. My mobiles autocorrect changed it to tones. But thank you I am aware.

  4. Stephanie Purser profile image81
    Stephanie Purserposted 2 months ago

    My mobile auto corrected the word "tonnes" to tones. Thank you, I am aware of the difference. But the emphasis was on "I did" instead of "I done".

  5. Stephanie Purser profile image81
    Stephanie Purserposted 2 months ago

    Sorry guys, my mobile is playing with me. My first comment didn't show so I retyped it. Don't mind me, one of those days.....

 
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