I'd like feedback on my article: Psychic Self Defense

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  1. Ehilenbalu D profile image81
    Ehilenbalu Dposted 7 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
    Here is my article: Psychic Self Defense

    1. theraggededge profile image96
      theraggededgeposted 7 months agoin reply to this

      Hi there,

      Too many images before the article begins. They are also very generic and don't do anything to help illustrate the text.

      You make a lot of claims in the article which you haven't backed up with scientific references. With this kind of topic (and I write about such things myself), you have to be very careful about stating ideas and opinions as facts.

      Make use of the text capsule's inbuilt numbering and bulleting tools, rather than typing them manually.

      Good luck.

      1. Ehilenbalu D profile image81
        Ehilenbalu Dposted 7 months agoin reply to this

        Thank you for your response. I finally got it right. I appreciate

    2. Duane Hennessy profile image86
      Duane Hennessyposted 7 months agoin reply to this

      I notice you're a mathematician writing about psychic self-defence so whilst reading your article I had some questions:

      - How did you get interested in the subject of psychic self-defence?
      - How did you form your model of how the body, mind, spirit/soul interact?
      - Have you at some time in the past repelled a psychic attack against yourself? How did you recognise it was a psychic attack and what method did you use? What was the result?

      You're from Nigeria, which I know to have two majority faiths of Christianity to the South and Islam to the North. Your article seems to be aligned with Christianity. Is there any benefit in contrasting the use of psychic self-defence from a Christian standpoint to that of a Moslem standpoint where they may have techniques to protect themselves from what they call "Jin"?

      Hopefully my questions are of help :-)

      1. Ehilenbalu D profile image81
        Ehilenbalu Dposted 7 months agoin reply to this

        I'm a Rosicrucian

  2. Ehilenbalu D profile image81
    Ehilenbalu Dposted 7 months ago

    Having psychic self defense is not streamlined to any particular religion. Be you a Muslim or Christian or whatever you practice, you can control your psyche... But my discourse wasn't based on any religion but mysticism. Thank you for you concern

 
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