I'd like feedback on my article: Health risks of Obesity

  1. Nageen Naeem profile image74
    Nageen Naeemposted 3 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Health risks of Obesity (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image95
      theraggededgeposted 3 weeks ago in reply to this

      Hi Nageen,

      The main problem with your article is that the topic is saturated. You are not saying anything new. Additionally your article has to compete with more authoritative sites so is unlikely to attract readers. Type your title into Google and see what sites come up on the first page - do you think you would be able to get your article on that first page? Or even the second?

      New writers on HubPages often think that there are no more subjects left to write about so they take something old and rewrite it. Why not write about a topic that is more personal to you?

      Good luck.

 
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