I'd like Feedback : Accelerate your Social Media to Boost Marketing

  1. Jeremy Gill profile image96
    Jeremy Gillposted 3 months ago

    Hmm.. this is a vague topic that I believe will struggle to attract readers. Plus, it needs some editing. Here are my suggestions:

    1) Way too text-heavy. You need more breaks than the single image. Use pictures/videos/graphs and/or polls for this.
    2) Proofread. Phrases like "This is creates an avenue for comments" disengage readers.
    3) Do not title capsules "conclusion."

    Again, I'd advise finding a more specific topic you're knowledgeable about, and try from there. Best of luck.

    1. Jeremy Gill profile image96
      Jeremy Gillposted 2 months agoin reply to this

      The initial post that I responded to is now gone; I believe that means their account was removed.

 
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