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    Automobile 180posted 7 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Best 150cc-400cc bikes to buy under 2 lacks in India. (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

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    Jeremy Gillposted 7 weeks ago

    Automobile, your grammar needs to be worked on. Many sentences have errors, and those that don't are often awkward.

    Examples: "It is the Best cruiser at this price", "Another most affordable and comfortable sports bike is Pulsar Rs 200", and "These are the reasons, why you must consider buying a R15".

    Seems you have the information and pictures you need. Now you need to articulate it clearly. Good luck.

 
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