I'd like feedback on my article: Amazing Superpowers that can be a curse

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    Automobile 180posted 6 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Amazing Superpowers that can be a curse. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. JynBranton profile image82
      JynBrantonposted 5 weeks agoin reply to this

      I actually like this. There's a lot of good content there. I wish I was on my computer so I could open in a second window so I could remember all the stuff I saw but it's just basic things.

      One paragraph you need to capitalize Flash. Somewhere you have a sentence starting with but. That's an easy change to just take that out an restructuring the sentence. Other than basic things like grammar and punctuation and a few things like capitalization you got this!

  2. Jeremy Gill profile image97
    Jeremy Gillposted 5 weeks ago

    Like Jyn said, grammar is the big thing to focus on.

    A few other tips:
    1) Caption your photos, and see if you can find a less blurry one for the animal.
    2) Remove extra white space between capsules.
    3) Keep the first poll but remove the second.

    Again, grammar/spelling is the most pressing issue.

 
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