I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Velvet Rope Posts- Features and Uses at a Glance (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!
Here are my suggestions:
1) Reword awkward sentences like "This way, the single product with so many uses at different places can do wonders at anywhere. It’s up to you that where do you see the product according to your professional usage requirements."
2) Add more pictures, and spread them throughout the Hub.
3) How many words do you have? Shoot for at least 700, and preferably more. You could discuss the price, types available, or anything else you can find.
4) A poll might help, perhaps one that asks whether the reader has ever utilized rope posts for themselves.
5) Try to use the active voice more than the passive.
In addition to the points Jeremy noted, remove the underline in the first paragraph. It is unnecessary. If you are thinking of adding links there, don't. Also remove the boldface text.
Break your text up into several capsules. That will enable you to use relevant (legal) images and keywords in sub-headings.
Your English is okay, but there are a lot of grammatical errors and clumsiness.
Overuse of keywords is not a good thing any more, so reduce the number of times you use them. There are 24 instances of 'rope posts'.
There's no need to state in your bio that your articles are 'very well researched'. The quality of your articles should be self-evident - no need to point it out to your reader; it comes across as tacky.
I see the company you work for sells this product - HubPages won't allow you to self-promote so you have to be careful. If you thought that you can promote your business here, you are mistaken. This is a site for writers.
Hope that helps.
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