I'd like feedback on my article: To Help People Quit Smoking Habits, the 'WHO'..

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  1. ManIntheMiddleqg profile image59
    ManIntheMiddleqgposted 7 years ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article To Help People Quit Smoking Habits, the 'WHO' Calls Out Carcinogenic Foods. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

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  2. Jeremy Gill profile image94
    Jeremy Gillposted 7 years ago

    Are you sure you posted the link correctly? It didn't work for me, and I don't see your Hub on your profile.

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    1. ManIntheMiddleqg profile image59
      ManIntheMiddleqgposted 7 years agoin reply to this
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      1. FatFreddysCat profile image60
        FatFreddysCatposted 7 years agoin reply to this

        I get "Page Does Not Exist" when I click that link too.

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        1. ManIntheMiddleqg profile image59
          ManIntheMiddleqgposted 7 years agoin reply to this

          There must be a technical glitch. Please, ignore this post.

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  3. Rupert Taylor profile image97
    Rupert Taylorposted 7 years ago

    There are quite a number of problems with this piece. The opening sentence runs on and after a couple of readings I still don't really understand it.

    Other sentences display clumsy grammar.

    I suggest running your copy through a free program such as Grammarly or Hemingway.

    Are your images legal to use? The link for the first one goes to "about blank."

    The article is too short. HubPages wants 1,000-word plus magazine style articles.

    You should not include your biographical information in the article; it should go in your profile.

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    1. ManIntheMiddleqg profile image59
      ManIntheMiddleqgposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      Thanks. I repaired the first paragraph. Yes, the images are Copyright protected, but, I have permission.

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      1. Jeremy Gill profile image94
        Jeremy Gillposted 7 years agoin reply to this

        1000+ words is a good benchmark, like Rupert said, but the very bare minimum lies around 600. Again, more is better, and this Hub needs much more.

        Starting your first sentence with "According to sources" sounds fishy. What sources?

        Your about the author section at the end is unnecessary; use a bio to offer a more natural summary of yourself.

        Good luck and keep at it.

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