I'd like feedback on my article: Feng Shui Bedrooms

  1. Michael Oon profile image74
    Michael Oonposted 3 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Feng Shui Bedrooms (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. tritrain profile image85
      tritrainposted 3 months agoin reply to this

      I like it, although I'm no expert on Feng Swe.  You may want to make it somewhat interactive, maybe a video.

  2. Rupert Taylor profile image99
    Rupert Taylorposted 3 months ago

    You are not allowed to self-promote on HubPages so you need to remove the links to your practice.

    The word energy is not a proper noun so it should not be capitalized. There are other instances of capital letters being used where they should not be.

    There are issues with grammar that can be caught by passing your article through a free program such as Grammarly or Hemingway.

    Outgoing links are not encourage as they take readers away from your text. You can cite sources at the end of the article.

 
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