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I'd like feedback on my article: Best VII Of The Twincities

  1. Shahaan Shakeel profile image85
    Shahaan Shakeelposted 2 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Best VII Of The Twincities (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. tritrain profile image83
      tritrainposted 2 weeks agoin reply to this

      I'm confused with the title.  The rest of the page looks great.  But, I thought at first that it was about the Twin Cities (2 nearby cities) in Minnesota, USA.  Oops.

      1. Shahaan Shakeel profile image85
        Shahaan Shakeelposted 2 weeks agoin reply to this

        Nah, its about two nearby cities in Pakistan (Islamabad and Rawalpindi)

  2. Rupert Taylor profile image100
    Rupert Taylorposted 2 weeks ago

    I find your headline confusing. Why the Roman numerals? Why seven when a soccer team has eleven players? It took me a while to figure out the game you are writing about is soccer/football. What are the two cities? And, twin cities should be two words.

    Are the images you have used free of copyright restrictions? It's not possible to tell.

    1. Shahaan Shakeel profile image85
      Shahaan Shakeelposted 2 weeks agoin reply to this

      Its basically a niche I'm targeting. And the images I took are from facebook, I gave them their facebook url in the url box but i figured that could be the problem so I removed them.

 
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