I'd like feedback on my article: Finding Love at Forty

  1. Neha Seth profile image83
    Neha Sethposted 2 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Finding Love at Forty (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. Jeremy Gill profile image95
    Jeremy Gillposted 2 months ago

    Hello Neha, here are some suggestions:

    1) Use headings to divide text and increase readability. I know this isn't easy with such a narrative-styled piece, but it helps.
    2) See if you can find a less-blurry picture, caption it, and maybe sprinkle a few more throughout.
    3) What's your word count? Try edging it a bit closer to 1000.
    4) Proofread. Correct a few minor errors, like a period placed a space after the sentence ended, like this .
    5) As a general tip, I hear narrative pieces can struggle to attract readers. Consider adding some informative sections; perhaps tips for how to find love in middle age.

    I did find your story interesting, glad to hear things worked out. Also, you added "inimical" to my vocabulary. Good luck!

    1. Neha Seth profile image83
      Neha Sethposted 2 months agoin reply to this

      HI
      Thanks a lot for your support .
      Regards
      Neha

 
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