I'd like feedback on my article: Love, Butterflies,time

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  1. CharlieHarvey1979 profile image61
    CharlieHarvey1979posted 5 years ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
    Here is my article: Love, Butterflies,time

  2. poppyr profile image95
    poppyrposted 5 years ago

    Hi, Charlie. Welcome to HubPages.

    Unfortunately, there are many English errors in your article. Try downloading Grammarly (it's free) and use it to pick up your mistakes. For example, the title should be "Love, Butterflies, Time" (not "Love, Butterflies,time").

    Try breaking up the text into small, readable paragraphs and use the text capsules on the right. For now, visit the Learning Center (click MORE in the top left) to learn the basic rules of HubPages. You can also visit my profile for the ToughNickel article "10 Ways to Ensure Your HubPages Article Gets Featured" to help you get your article visible to search engines. Good luck!

  3. Rupert Taylor profile image95
    Rupert Taylorposted 5 years ago

    You keep posting these pieces that are unintelligible and filled with poor grammar. Several people have offered you advice on how to improve but you seem to ignore their coaching.

    You can continue posting pieces such as this to your heart's content but they'll never get featured and experienced Hubbers will tire of trying to help.

    1. CharlieHarvey1979 profile image61
      CharlieHarvey1979posted 5 years agoin reply to this

      ty too

  4. NessMovieReviews profile image86
    NessMovieReviewsposted 5 years ago

    Actually, he has 3 featured poems and comments on them praising his poetry.

    I think this particular one has some rhythm to it. It just looks weird unpublished. The formatting must fix up the bulk of the text when the poetry topic is chosen

    1. CharlieHarvey1979 profile image61
      CharlieHarvey1979posted 5 years agoin reply to this


  5. erorantes profile image37
    erorantesposted 5 years ago

    Good morning mister Charlie. I read a few poems at hub pages. I like your poem . If you divide your poem in small paragraph of five sentences and add a picture of a butterfly for the instruduction of your poem it will capture your audience. Good day to you mister Charlie.


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