I'd like feedback on my article: Child Abuse In Pakistan

  1. Shahaan Shakeel profile image85
    Shahaan Shakeelposted 6 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Child Abuse In Pakistan (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. Shahaan Shakeel profile image85
    Shahaan Shakeelposted 6 months ago

    Needs Improvement
    This article is unpublished because it did not receive high enough ratings to meet HubPages' quality standards or because it contains spammy elements. It will remain unpublished until it is edited, published again, and rated high enough to be Featured. To see our rating criteria, please visit our official rating scale (we recommend shooting for criteria matching articles rated eight or above).

    this is what they're saying. Help, pleasee

  3. docashp profile image50
    docashpposted 6 months ago

    It provides some statics to prove that the situation is grave and then it ends abruptly. You should try to add more content and use more headings and sub headings in your hub to make it more optimised for reading by viewers and easier for search engines to find.

 
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