I'd like feedback on my article: Utilizing B2b Strategies Is This Deca

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  1. Amalendu Nath profile image69
    Amalendu Nathposted 11 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    Here is my article: Utilizing B2b Strategies Is This Decade’s Secret to Success in the Marketplace

    https://hubpages.com/business/Utilizing … arketplace

    1. theraggededge profile image99
      theraggededgeposted 11 months agoin reply to this

      Did you ask for feedback and then immediately unpublish? Or did you change the link?

      1. Amalendu Nath profile image69
        Amalendu Nathposted 11 months agoin reply to this

        I have not unpublished the said article. I have posted the article yesterday night and now see its unpublished (and in draft status) by hubpages moderator.

        Should I republish the article without any changes, as I don't know the problem with article moderator found in article.

        1. theraggededge profile image99
          theraggededgeposted 11 months agoin reply to this

          Okay, so you changed the url when you made your original post? Go back to the notification and click the link again. Don't change anything. It posts an automatic message here and contains a special url.

      2. Amalendu Nath profile image69
        Amalendu Nathposted 11 months agoin reply to this

        Can you suggest me on how to improve quality score of this article?

        1. Beth Eaglescliffe profile image96
          Beth Eaglescliffeposted 11 months agoin reply to this

          https://hubpages.com/community/forum/34 … ost4150458
          As I previously commented, your personal experience of B2B trading could be useful to your readers. I don't see anything in your article that covers this. 

          Take out the link to the Lithuanian Marketplace. HubPages classes promotional links as spam. Instead describe what the Lithuanian Marketplace is, what it does, and why it helps B2B traders. Compare and contrast it to several other similar organisations; that way it won't be seen as promotional.

          1. Amalendu Nath profile image69
            Amalendu Nathposted 11 months agoin reply to this

            Its ok, removing links

    2. Pikuhoney profile image76
      Pikuhoneyposted 11 months agoin reply to this

      I also need  tge same can you help me

      1. theraggededge profile image99
        theraggededgeposted 11 months agoin reply to this

        Click on the link in the notification you were sent.

    3. Amalendu Nath profile image69
      Amalendu Nathposted 11 months agoin reply to this

      Hi Hubbers,

      I still need your suggestions to pass Quality Assessment Process.

      1. theraggededge profile image99
        theraggededgeposted 11 months agoin reply to this

        Sorry, only have time to skim it. These are some things I would change:

        I would remove the description 'new age'. That means something else.

        https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/New_Age.

        You've used the term, B2B, 38 times, which is excessive. Try to reduce it. You've also mixed up upper case and lower case, which looks unprofessional.

        Your introduction intimates that B2B is a 'new age' phenomena, but your conclusion says that it is ancient.

        Good luck.

  2. Amalendu Nath profile image69
    Amalendu Nathposted 11 months ago

    No, I have not changed the url. The article is simply unpublished by any Hubpages Moderator, and hence not visible online.

    My notification section did not have any option to "click the link again". The notification section simply shows there is no online notifications.

    Should I republish the article as it is?

  3. Amalendu Nath profile image69
    Amalendu Nathposted 11 months ago

    I have republished the article now. Please check again and give me suggestions to improve same.

  4. CYong74 profile image98
    CYong74posted 11 months ago

    Hi, I don't usually write business articles, so all I can do is to tell you my gut feel on reading your hub.

    Firstly, your English is fine though on the wordy side. Your hub will also benefit from much more paragraph ing and legal to use pictures. Large chunks of text are very unattractive to read.

    Secondly, you explained B2B as if it's a new concept that requires much introduction. But the model has been around for decades. I was already doing business with this model as far back as 2000.

    Of course, you could say you are explaining to absolute beginners. In which case, well, there are tons of far more informative beginner's guides online.

    Lastly, most of your tips, suggestions, etc, are superficial. Sorry to put it this way, your paragraphs are long but without substantial info. You are just repeating the same thing again and again, albeit with jargon inserted here and there.

  5. Amalendu Nath profile image69
    Amalendu Nathposted 11 months ago

    Thanks for your opinions. I will try to improve the article further accordingly.

  6. JNalbach419 profile image91
    JNalbach419posted 11 months ago

    The Article itself is actually very well written, try adding at least one original photograph. Stellar Articles require at least one photo. https://hubpageshelp.com/content/Learni … -image-use

  7. Amalendu Nath profile image69
    Amalendu Nathposted 11 months ago

    Thanks for your opinion. I am adding a photograph.

  8. bhattuc profile image80
    bhattucposted 11 months ago

    Amalendu, this is your first hub. Every site would be critical of the first contribution of the author. Never mind. Go ahead with more number of articles and mean while try to improve this one so that it is featured.
    What I can suggest is structure your article in small capsules with subheadings and try to cover that aspect fully there. Do not bring that point elsewhere. Second is at times use bullets rather than long paragraphs. Many people skip long paragraphs. Include videos and some important points in boxes to show their prominence. Content is ok but to present it in an attractive form is also sometimes required. All the best.
    My first article could feature only after 3 revisions and today when I look back it requires immediate update. It is lacking many things.

  9. Amalendu Nath profile image69
    Amalendu Nathposted 11 months ago

    Thanks bhattuc for your details suggestions. I will keep in mind for next articles.

  10. Amalendu Nath profile image69
    Amalendu Nathposted 11 months ago

    Thanks theraggededge. I am trying to update accordingly.

 
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