I'd Like Feedback on my Article: Nice Things to Say to Your Husband

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  1. incomeguru profile image97
    incomeguruposted 11 months ago

    Hello Hubbers,

    The editor that reviewed my article asked me to correct the issue in the note below:

    "Hey, Folarin! The grammar/syntax in this needs some work. It's more than I can do in our allotted queue editing time. I recommend posting your article in the forums and seeing if the community can help you clean up some of the grammar. Thanks for sharing this with us."

    Here's the link to the article

    https://hubpages.com/relationships/Nice … ppreciated

    Thanks for your kind help.

    1. theraggededge profile image99
      theraggededgeposted 11 months agoin reply to this

      Have you run it through Grammarly and Hemingway?

      1. incomeguru profile image97
        incomeguruposted 11 months agoin reply to this

        I ran it through Grammarly. Is Hemingway also free?

        1. theraggededge profile image99
          theraggededgeposted 11 months agoin reply to this

          Yes smile The online version is free.

          1. incomeguru profile image97
            incomeguruposted 11 months agoin reply to this

            I tried to use Hemingway but I didn't get the way it works. Can you run the article through it for me, please?

            1. theraggededge profile image99
              theraggededgeposted 11 months agoin reply to this

              Just copy and paste the text in, then use the colors to decode the suggestions which are in the sidebar. Edit right there on the page. Then you can either save the document or copy and paste back into your word processor, or in sections into HP capsules. It's simple, but can be time consuming, so no, sorry, I can't do it for you smile

              The thing is, if we fix your whole article, you won't learn how to next time. Make the effort now and it will pay dividends in the future. It's not like your English is awful, in fact it's pretty good.

              I don't think I'd ever say any of those things to my partner though big_smile

      2. EricFarmer8x profile image97
        EricFarmer8xposted 11 months agoin reply to this

        Thank you very much for recommending Hemingway. I use Grammarly and this another great tool for me to use.

 
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