Would someone please take time out of his or her busy schedule and read through my article for any spelling or grammar issues. Would like to submit it to a niche site in some few weeks and so need an extra pair of eyes on it. Thank you in advance.
https://hubpages.com/religion-philosoph … ng-Origins
Spelling looks fine, grammar is good. The only thing I can suggest is to perhaps ad a concluding paragraph to wrap it up -- it seems to end rather abruptly.
Maybe you could even take part of your introduction-- and use it as a conclusion.
Spell out "Six" in your title instead of using a numeral.
I also think the numbers on your subheading titles are not necessary.
Interesting tales, for sure.
(I like the friendly crocodiles.)
I think this is a really good and interesting article. I agree with Rochelle, that you can put conclusion paragraph. You might also consider adding 1-2 sentences about Ghana at the beginning (population, geo location, curious facts) to familiarise people with the topic and raise their curiosity.
by Dr Mark2 days ago
Last night I went in an edited a capsule so that it would be full width, which is what HP wants everyone to do. The article I edited has been published and featured since 2012. When I went in and edited, however, the...
by Tessa Schlesinger2 weeks ago
https://hubpages.com/travel/Olvera-Spai … in-the-SunToo many photos?Too little text?I could write up some history of the area.
by Marisa Wright21 hours ago
I wish the editors would stop telling people to post on the forums to get their work proof-read!Most Hubbers are very happy to read an article and offer advice on how to improve it - we've done that for years. We...
by Maurice Glaude3 days ago
I'm almost sure there are some grammatical or spelling mistakes. Please help if you can proof read this article for me. 11:11 The Phenomenon and Numerology Crystal Connectionhttps://hubpages.com/religion-philosoph...
by Gordon Hamilton6 years ago
I actually thought about sharing this story earlier this week when it happened, to emphasise the importance of proof reading on Hubs. I didn't - through embarrassment - but have decided it might be a useful pointer to...
by Eugene Brennan2 weeks ago
Is this a bug or am I tying with Briggs for a featured snippet? It seems odd. The picture can be clicked and leads to DenGarden
Copyright © 2017 HubPages Inc. and respective owners.
Other product and company names shown may be trademarks of their respective owners.
HubPages® is a registered Service Mark of HubPages, Inc.
HubPages and Hubbers (authors) may earn revenue on this page based on affiliate relationships and advertisements with partners including Amazon, Google, and others.