I'd like feedback on my article: Dealing with Migraines

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    spatzsawyerposted 2 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Dealing with Migraines (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

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      anusha15posted 2 weeks agoin reply to this

      There are numerous typos and grammatical mistakes.
      For example, "this is know as acute treatment" --> "this is known as acute treatment"
      And,
      "Neurologists may recommended" --> "Neurologists may recommend"

      I would suggest Grammarly. Copy the content of your article, and paste it there, and you will be able to correct most of your mistakes.

      But apart from these, you have several issues when it comes to "phrasing". The sentences you have constructed are somewhat awkward. If you have a friend who is good with Grammar and literature, I think it would be a great idea to request him or her to work with for first few articles. Then you will be good to go smile

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        spatzsawyerposted 2 weeks agoin reply to this

        Thank you I forgot to proof read maybe that is why this is happening. Thanks for suggesting Grammarly

 
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