I'd like feedback on my article: 2 SIMPLE DE-STRESSING TECHNIQUES

  1. Surabhi Vani Vani profile image60
    Surabhi Vani Vaniposted 4 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article 2 SIMPLE DE-STRESSING TECHNIQUES (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. Rupert Taylor profile image98
    Rupert Taylorposted 4 months ago

    There are several problems with this article.

    You should never use all caps for your title, it's shouty and rude. It should be in Title Face.

    "Well!" This is not a compelling opening. You need a clear and concise introduction that tells readers what rewards they are going to get from reading your article.

    Your grammar is not up to the standard required. You can run your text through a free program such as Grammarly or Hemingway, but these may not catch all the errors.

    Random capital letters need to be removed; caps should only be used to start a sentence or with a proper noun.

    Are your images free of copyright restrictions? Under Source it says "self-clicked." What does that mean?

    You need to remove the bold face text.

    You need to spend some time at the Learning Center here https://hubpageshelp.com/

    1. Surabhi Vani Vani profile image60
      Surabhi Vani Vaniposted 4 months agoin reply to this

      Hi!
      Thank you for the valuable feedback. Well noted.

 
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