I'd like feedback on my article: Three simple tips to make decisions free of...

  1. Sajeewa R profile image60
    Sajeewa Rposted 3 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Three simple tips to make decisions free of stress (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. Jeremy Gill profile image97
    Jeremy Gillposted 2 weeks ago

    Some ideas:

    1) Capitalize key words in your title.
    2) Improve  formatting. Some paragraphs could use subheadings or other diving, and why is there such a big space after the word "less" in the George Eliot quote?
    3) As much as I love Star Wars, the Yoda quote feels out-of-place and ill-formatted. Maybe it'll work better if incorporated more organically (for starters, italicize movie titles).

    As a general piece of advice, maybe try more specific topics. What are your hobbies or areas of expertise? Your writing style may flourish more in those fields.

 
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