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I'd like feedback on my article: The bad effects of the internet

  1. F 96 profile image61
    F 96posted 4 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article The bad effects of the internet (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. Rupert Taylor profile image98
    Rupert Taylorposted 4 weeks ago

    Headlines have to be in Title Face

    Images have to be legal to use.

    Your punctuation is wrong. Spaces are not placed in front of commas, periods, etc.

    You should get rid of the italic script.

    There are also several grammar errors.

    1. F 96 profile image61
      F 96posted 4 weeks agoin reply to this

      I'm thankful for these notes , I will work on them

  3. LoisRyan13903 profile image82
    LoisRyan13903posted 3 weeks ago

    I would not like it as a play but as an actual story. Maybe add more description, such as Sara running her hand through he hair in frustration while trying to cook dinner and catching on on the latest news.

    1. F 96 profile image61
      F 96posted 3 weeks agoin reply to this

      This is wonderful idea

 
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