I'd like feedback on my article: Loan or Lease, the future of crypto lending?

  1. lukewootton profile image57
    lukewoottonposted 5 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Loan or Lease, the future of crypto lending? (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. Jeremy Gill profile image96
    Jeremy Gillposted 4 weeks ago

    Before talking about anything else with the article, proofread. There are many grammar errors and awkward sentences. Work on formatting; don't bold an entire text capsule, and don't place a period after one bullet point but not the other bullet points.

    Examples:
    "Now this may not mean much to sum"
    "I began to read over their white paper and this was the first page I see."

    Here's a sentence that isn't wrong but is awkward:
    "Look, I am no trading master or anything."

    1. lukewootton profile image57
      lukewoottonposted 3 weeks agoin reply to this

      Thank you! I will go over it again and make sure those get corrected as well as the others!

 
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