I'd like feedback on my article: IoT - Security In Smart Homes

  1. chandrapal-IoT profile image46
    chandrapal-IoTposted 2 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article IoT - Security In Smart Homes (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. Rupert Taylor profile image98
    Rupert Taylorposted 2 months ago

    There are several grammar errors in your article, most notably the absence of definite articles (the) and indefinite articles (a). This is a frequently seen problem in articles submitted from the Indian sub-continent.

    Also, your article is too short. HubPages looks for magazine-style articles that have rich media content of at least 1,000 words.

 
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