I'd like feedback on my article: Rabindra Sangeet- The Life of Bengali Music

  1. Sanchaita profile image66
    Sanchaitaposted 12 days ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Rabindra Sangeet- The Life of Bengali Music (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. AliciaC profile image98
    AliciaCposted 12 days ago

    Hi. I enjoyed reading your article. I'd like to learn more about the music that you describe. The article contains some grammar errors, which need to be corrected. It would also be great if it contained some more information to help readers who aren't familiar with the music. For example, you say in the first sentence "as the name suggests", but for people who have never heard about Rabindra Sangeet, the name probably doesn't suggest anything.

    Since your article is about a particular type of music, videos demonstrating the music would be a great addition. The addition of photos with a suitable license would also make the article look more interesting.

    1. Sanchaita profile image66
      Sanchaitaposted 12 days agoin reply to this

      Thank you for your suggestion

 
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