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Mastering French Cooking

  1. SimeyC profile image96
    SimeyCposted 8 years ago

    So I just did my second Hub and hopefully I'm getting the hang of this thing!


    It's about Julia Child's book Mastering The Art of French Cooking, Volume One, and ties into the new movie Julie and Julia.

    Let me know what you think - what can I do to improve it!

    Thanks in advance.

  2. Uninvited Writer profile image83
    Uninvited Writerposted 8 years ago

    Well, you call her Julia Childs a few times in the article. Also, it's copywriter, not copyrighter. You mistakenly typed Pearly Harbor. These are all minor things but they can effect your earning potential and credibility.

    I hate to say it but this is not as good as the other hub with a similar title and topic that was written a few days ago. Hers is a good example of a very well-written hub:

    http://hubpages.com/hub/Mastering-The-A … ch-Cooking

    It happens here sometimes that people have the same idea at the same time smile

    After all that, welcome to HubPages.

    1. SimeyC profile image96
      SimeyCposted 8 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you for the honest appraisal - I corrected the typos! I appreciate your honesty about anothe hub being better - that's how I'll learn to improve!

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    dennisemattposted 8 years ago

    i left you a comment, and i think it psoted twice. oops.

    1. SimeyC profile image96
      SimeyCposted 8 years agoin reply to this

      Thanks for the comment - and yes you did leave the comment twice LOL!