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Mastering French Cooking

  1. SimeyC profile image97
    SimeyCposted 8 years ago

    So I just did my second Hub and hopefully I'm getting the hang of this thing!

    http://hubpages.com/hub/Mastering-French-Cooking

    It's about Julia Child's book Mastering The Art of French Cooking, Volume One, and ties into the new movie Julie and Julia.

    Let me know what you think - what can I do to improve it!

    Thanks in advance.

  2. Uninvited Writer profile image84
    Uninvited Writerposted 8 years ago

    Well, you call her Julia Childs a few times in the article. Also, it's copywriter, not copyrighter. You mistakenly typed Pearly Harbor. These are all minor things but they can effect your earning potential and credibility.

    I hate to say it but this is not as good as the other hub with a similar title and topic that was written a few days ago. Hers is a good example of a very well-written hub:

    http://hubpages.com/hub/Mastering-The-A … ch-Cooking

    It happens here sometimes that people have the same idea at the same time smile

    After all that, welcome to HubPages.

    1. SimeyC profile image97
      SimeyCposted 8 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you for the honest appraisal - I corrected the typos! I appreciate your honesty about anothe hub being better - that's how I'll learn to improve!

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    dennisemattposted 8 years ago

    i left you a comment, and i think it psoted twice. oops.

    1. SimeyC profile image97
      SimeyCposted 8 years agoin reply to this

      Thanks for the comment - and yes you did leave the comment twice LOL!

 
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