The first Hub I took some time on and created for hubpages!
I think you did a mawvelous job
hehehe. Only thing wrong is the picture near the bottom. I didn't see anything except a box with a x 
did you use the photo capsule? otherwise, it looks great. 
welcome to HubPages!
resume’s should be resumes (several times)
you’re readers should be your readers.
google is a proper noun, so should be Google.
You set yourself up for that.
Good luck. Great hub!
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