Would Appreciate Your Feedback

Jump to Last Post 1-4 of 4 discussions (7 posts)
  1. J. McCoy profile image60
    J. McCoyposted 9 years ago

    I haven't written in about 3 years and I'm new to Hubpages. So, I could use your feedback, opinions, ideas, and especially constructive criticism. Thanks for taking the time to come by and critique.

    http://hubpages.com/hub/Extended-Warran … in-English

  2. Lady_E profile image68
    Lady_Eposted 9 years ago

    Well done on your First Hub - it's an interesting Read.

    You could include more books in your Amazon Capsule if you wanted to.

    Hope you enjoy writing on HP.

    1. J. McCoy profile image60
      J. McCoyposted 9 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you for the advice. I will.

  3. Paradise7 profile image83
    Paradise7posted 9 years ago

    I thought that was a really decent hub, and didn't find anything wrong with it.  It contained a lot of information about extended warranties that is of general interest.

    One little suggestion:  when you get to the part where you're listing the odds of coming out ahead, and comparing them to the casino, you might want to do a list with bullets rather than put the info in a paragraph. 

    It was still entirely readable the way you did it and, of course, your personal and artistic choice.

    Thank you for a good hub!

    1. J. McCoy profile image60
      J. McCoyposted 9 years agoin reply to this

      That's a great idea that would make it easier reading. Thank you! I'll remember that for future hubs.

  4. lrohner profile image80
    lrohnerposted 9 years ago

    Really great job! Great writing and layout and good use of tags. I think the only input I would have is to keep your URL short and sweet. It doesn't have to reflect the whole title. In your case, I would have had a URL of http://hubpages.com/hub/extended-warran … ice-plans.

    And you have AdSense turned off for the hub. Was that intentional? Do you have an AdSense account? If not, you might want to bump up the Amazon ads and place them higher on the page as someone else suggested or you're simply not going to make any money.

    1. J. McCoy profile image60
      J. McCoyposted 9 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you for the advice! I don't know how long I would've used longer URL's if you hadn't told me that. I also didn't know exactly how Adsense works within HubPages. I'll make sure to get an account asap. Thanks again for taking the time to give me such specific and helpful advice!


This website uses cookies

As a user in the EEA, your approval is needed on a few things. To provide a better website experience, hubpages.com uses cookies (and other similar technologies) and may collect, process, and share personal data. Please choose which areas of our service you consent to our doing so.

For more information on managing or withdrawing consents and how we handle data, visit our Privacy Policy at: https://hubpages.com/privacy-policy#gdpr

Show Details
HubPages Device IDThis is used to identify particular browsers or devices when the access the service, and is used for security reasons.
LoginThis is necessary to sign in to the HubPages Service.
Google RecaptchaThis is used to prevent bots and spam. (Privacy Policy)
AkismetThis is used to detect comment spam. (Privacy Policy)
HubPages Google AnalyticsThis is used to provide data on traffic to our website, all personally identifyable data is anonymized. (Privacy Policy)
HubPages Traffic PixelThis is used to collect data on traffic to articles and other pages on our site. Unless you are signed in to a HubPages account, all personally identifiable information is anonymized.
Amazon Web ServicesThis is a cloud services platform that we used to host our service. (Privacy Policy)
CloudflareThis is a cloud CDN service that we use to efficiently deliver files required for our service to operate such as javascript, cascading style sheets, images, and videos. (Privacy Policy)
Google Hosted LibrariesJavascript software libraries such as jQuery are loaded at endpoints on the googleapis.com or gstatic.com domains, for performance and efficiency reasons. (Privacy Policy)
Google Custom SearchThis is feature allows you to search the site. (Privacy Policy)
Google MapsSome articles have Google Maps embedded in them. (Privacy Policy)
Google ChartsThis is used to display charts and graphs on articles and the author center. (Privacy Policy)
Google AdSense Host APIThis service allows you to sign up for or associate a Google AdSense account with HubPages, so that you can earn money from ads on your articles. No data is shared unless you engage with this feature. (Privacy Policy)
Google YouTubeSome articles have YouTube videos embedded in them. (Privacy Policy)
VimeoSome articles have Vimeo videos embedded in them. (Privacy Policy)
PaypalThis is used for a registered author who enrolls in the HubPages Earnings program and requests to be paid via PayPal. No data is shared with Paypal unless you engage with this feature. (Privacy Policy)
Facebook LoginYou can use this to streamline signing up for, or signing in to your Hubpages account. No data is shared with Facebook unless you engage with this feature. (Privacy Policy)
MavenThis supports the Maven widget and search functionality. (Privacy Policy)
Google AdSenseThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
Google DoubleClickGoogle provides ad serving technology and runs an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
Index ExchangeThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
SovrnThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
Facebook AdsThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
Amazon Unified Ad MarketplaceThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
AppNexusThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
OpenxThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
Rubicon ProjectThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
TripleLiftThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
Say MediaWe partner with Say Media to deliver ad campaigns on our sites. (Privacy Policy)
Remarketing PixelsWe may use remarketing pixels from advertising networks such as Google AdWords, Bing Ads, and Facebook in order to advertise the HubPages Service to people that have visited our sites.
Conversion Tracking PixelsWe may use conversion tracking pixels from advertising networks such as Google AdWords, Bing Ads, and Facebook in order to identify when an advertisement has successfully resulted in the desired action, such as signing up for the HubPages Service or publishing an article on the HubPages Service.
Author Google AnalyticsThis is used to provide traffic data and reports to the authors of articles on the HubPages Service. (Privacy Policy)
ComscoreComScore is a media measurement and analytics company providing marketing data and analytics to enterprises, media and advertising agencies, and publishers. Non-consent will result in ComScore only processing obfuscated personal data. (Privacy Policy)
Amazon Tracking PixelSome articles display amazon products as part of the Amazon Affiliate program, this pixel provides traffic statistics for those products (Privacy Policy)