I'm into writing short stories; mostly fiction and personal experience. I've been posting most of my stories on Facebook notes, but I want more creative feedback than "Awe, that was sad/good." I'm ready for any feedback, good or bad.
Help me out!
Why are you asking for help ......
you have something than just post ....
rest will be appreciated if good ....
Everyone is entitled to ask for help.
Pabst I read two out of the three hubs you have posted. There were a few typos that I saw but other than that I think you did a fine job on them. This really isn't a writing site for that kind of writing though. Not a critique forum site that is. It is fine to post your creative work but to really make the most out of the site you want to post some articles and utilize your keywords and such so you can earn a little bit too while you are here.
Great reading and welcome aboard.
You 've done a lot of hard work in the short time you've been here. I think lynnechandler is right. If you look at other hubs you'll see that they are not very personal, not like diaries but more to share something of common interest, like how to's or why's or interesting new information etc. Also I would use more text capsules and headings, perhaps some pictures and videos to break up the text.
Keep going. One way of depersonalising content is to "translate" it into the third person. One way to commercialise is to write content relating to some product or rich keywords.
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