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My hub

  1. emievil profile image77
    emievilposted 8 years ago

    Did you pull out the hub? When I clicked the link, it says the hub does not exist.

  2. shazwellyn profile image57
    shazwellynposted 8 years ago

    No hub on this link

  3. Uninvited Writer profile image83
    Uninvited Writerposted 8 years ago

    Take the period off of the end of the URL and you will find it...

    I found it very short. I would have given more history into the games, etc.

  4. lrohner profile image80
    lrohnerposted 8 years ago

    I couldn't get through the first paragraph. You really do need to run your hubs through a spell/grammar check before publishing. Do you have anyone that could help you with your English? The keyword stuffing in the first paragraph didn't make it any more pleasing either. Sorry, but that's my honest opinion.

    1. Marisa Wright profile image98
      Marisa Wrightposted 8 years agoin reply to this

      I have to agree.  I know it's tough for non-English speakers but the reality is that if you want readers to take you seriously, you need to write good English.

      The Hub is too short and needs illustrations.  Please be sure you use public domain photos or creative commons licensed ones, though.

  5. Casper021 profile image56
    Casper021posted 8 years ago

    link does not work