Notes needed!

  1. hypnodude profile image73
    hypnodudeposted 7 years ago

    Hi,
    I've posted my first hub and I would like to receive notes about it. This is the address http://hubpages.com/hub/Self-Hypnosis-m … troduction

    Any notes welcomed and thanks for your help to beginners like me.
    I love this website.

    hypnodude

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  2. kirstenblog profile image77
    kirstenblogposted 7 years ago

    As you know I left a comment on your first hub and found it intelligently written and informative. I guess the only tip I could offer to make it a friendly read for the internet and for the purposes of search engine traffic breaking it into smaller paragraphs and using multiple text capsules with titles can be helpful for folks. This also gives you the chance to pepper the titles with good relevant keywords for the search engine spiders to find and thus rank you a bit higher for searches. I did notice that you did this a bit more in your second hub (at least it read like you did).

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  3. hypnodude profile image73
    hypnodudeposted 7 years ago

    Yeah, well, I've received some good advices in the meantime. smile
    Though I haven't thought about using more than one text capsule.
    Thanks Kirsten.

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