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Finish this Poem, I'll start it you finish it. then we will name it!

  1. ronald lewis profile image52
    ronald lewisposted 9 years ago

    My blood has been harvested for so many years
    I am but human, so what do you fear?
    Like your shadow that touched your mother at birth
    I feel as if I were holding you first
    My thirst for immortality eludes my flesh
    Out of this shell exudes my breath
    Like a moment in time you wish you were there
    I am the young boy that was hoping you cared
    The lady who lost sleep just to gaze in your eyes
    Like Christ in the flesh, betrayed by a lie
    Not knowing tommorow, only the past
    Not first of a dying breed, only the last

  2. WeddingConsultant profile image70
    WeddingConsultantposted 9 years ago

    Roses are red,
    Violets are blue,
    I am bad at poems
    I'm not as good as you!

  3. ebc profile image55
    ebcposted 9 years ago

    My blood has been harvested for so many years
    I am but human, so what do you fear?
    Like your shadow that touched your mother at birth
    I feel as if I were holding you first
    My thirst for immortality eludes my flesh
    Out of this shell exudes my breath
    Like a moment in time you wish you were there
    I am the young boy that was hoping you cared
    The lady who lost sleep just to gaze in your eyes
    Like Christ in the flesh, betrayed by a lie
    Not knowing tommorow, only the past
    Not first of a dying breed, only the last

    Like frayed and tattered wings heard nigh
    Flying on life's whispered sigh
    I long to cling to slivered hope
    Whilst meandering down life's fecund slope

  4. ladyk78 profile image53
    ladyk78posted 9 years ago

    "My blood has been harvested for so many years
    I am but human, so what do you fear?
    Like your shadow that touched your mother at birth
    I feel as if I were holding you first
    My thirst for immortality eludes my flesh
    Out of this shell exudes my breath
    Like a moment in time you wish you were there
    I am the young boy that was hoping you cared
    The lady who lost sleep just to gaze in your eyes
    Like Christ in the flesh, betrayed by a lie
    Not knowing tommorow, only the past
    Not first of a dying breed, only the last

    Like frayed and tattered wings heard nigh
    Flying on life's whispered sigh
    I long to cling to slivered hope
    Whilst meandering down life's fecund slope"

    Just when I thought all hope was gone
    I looked onto the horizon to see the dawn
    Each new day is a chance to start over
    With hope, faith, and a three leaf clover
    Not that I am big on luck or chance
    I just refuse to be a victim of circumstance

 
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