I'd like feedback on my article: 7 WWE Superstars who are going to steal the...

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    ThoughtsDiversityposted 14 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article 7 WWE Superstars who are going to steal the spotlight this year. (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    I'm actually totally new here and this is my first article I have edited it like 3 times but it never makes the cut

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    1. theraggededge profile image96
      theraggededgeposted 14 months agoin reply to this

      I don't see any commas or other punctuation, apart from full stops/periods. Your grammar needs a lot of work to make it acceptable for HubPages.

      Put an extra return between paragraphs. As I have done here.

      Read your text aloud to pick up any errors in phrasing. Try pasting it into Grammarly (free online) to help you with the grammar.

      Make sure all images are legal-to-use, with the appropriate licenses for a commercial site. You can't just take images off the web and republish them under your own byline. You might end up with a demand for payment for unauthorised use.  https://hubpageshelp.com/content/Learni … -image-use

      Good luck.

      https://hubpageshelp.com/

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  2. DrMark1961 profile image95
    DrMark1961posted 14 months ago

    Hi Muhammed,
    the title needs to be in title case. Go to https://capitalizemytitle.com/ and make sure that your title follows APA guidelines.
    You need to use images that are in the creative commons and that you can publish on a commercial site.
    There are numerous grammatical and spelling errors throughout the article. (Example: "When finn balõr joined WWE his career was running high on success") You need some help proofreading.
    Most of the articles that do well on Hubpages are evergreen, which means that they draw traffic for many years because they cover topics that do not age. Even if you do get this article past QA, will anyone be interested in reading this in a year or two?

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    ThoughtsDiversityposted 14 months ago

    Theraggededge I acted upon your advice and tried grammarly keyboard and made everything ok then I also put additional return between paragraphs as well. It still didn't made the cut.

    Drmark1961 I looked after your advice as well and I think yeah it's not an evergreen article so I'd just let this one go

    Thanks to you both for trying to help me

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