I'd like feedback on my article: The Black Panther Movie - Who is this Marvel...

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    James Octavoposted 4 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article The Black Panther Movie - Who is this Marvel Super-Hero? Why All the Excitement and Hype? (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. DrMark1961 profile image99
    DrMark1961posted 4 weeks ago

    This is kind of like a blog post. Hubpages wants you to write magazine style articles.
    Problems with passing QAP:
    No photos--your article is not illustrated in any way.
    No other devices to keep readers on your page--If your reader looks at this article and then bounces out to find something more interesting, your ads will never appear and never be seen. You will not be paid for any page views you do manage to get.
    Title is too long.
    Text is in one big block-You need to break up your text in to smaller sections (using multiple text capsules) and use those subtitles (origins, for example), correctly.
    A few typos--HP is not going to spend the time and money to edit your hub since you will not have adequate page views and impressions.
    I read the article because I was interested in the subject matter and found your views interesting. I doubt many people are going to find this though when they search for info about the Black Panther movie.

    Check out the learning center to find out more on how to write here. Read some articles written and moved to the niche sites to find out what is going to work.

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      James Octavoposted 4 weeks agoin reply to this

      Thanks. I will save and use your tutorial. From your detailed analysis, I learned a lot. I will definitely apply your ideas to future articles and will rewrite this one. (I was in hurry to get it posted before the awesome movie came out.) Thank again. Excelsior!